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19/08/2010, 03:10 AM
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Rendezvous in the Sky .....
Rendezvous in the Sky
I've become so numb in this world My spirit sleeping somewhere cold And lost in the fantasy world No one could lead it back home Everything seems concealed With people in disguise Who try to hide their evil deeds In a universe filled with fiends Not knowing that the day will come When all will be revealed I held that belief That nothing could relieve My deep wounds as to heal Until an angel came And fought away my fears To wipe away my tears Made me see, hear and feel Healed the pain that last for years Being in a cruel world's ruined me Carry me away with you please To the sky to fly together you and me Where I could live in peace I'm not numb any more I can truly feel you here Cause your presence still lingers With all that's close and dear ThetiS  آخر تحرير بواسطة Elektra : 19/08/2010 الساعة 05:05 AM |
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19/08/2010, 03:13 AM
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Nice poem ^_^, I liked it
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19/08/2010, 03:21 AM
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19/08/2010, 03:23 AM
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Sweet poem indeed
It injects all kind of hope to heart Hope to read more for you dear
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19/08/2010, 04:58 AM
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thanks a lot Life Storm ...  I will write more in sha Allah ...  |
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19/08/2010, 05:35 AM
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Aww beautiful!! :'D
Reminds me of My Immortal </3  Keep writing ;D
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19/08/2010, 02:43 PM
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molto grazie sweetie ... Im so into Evanescence Songs  Amy lee is my best ever sounded like me somehow  |
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19/08/2010, 03:14 PM
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And fought away my fears
To wipe away my tears Made me see, hear and feel Healed the pain that last for years i loved it and that was my favorite part.. i hope i can write something like that.. |
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19/08/2010, 04:40 PM
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Danke schön Faris |
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19/08/2010, 04:55 PM
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is that Russian..?? 
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19/08/2010, 11:05 PM
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Superb ,
Endless thanks ...
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20/08/2010, 12:28 AM
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Feeling "numb" is supposed to feel like nothing but when we really think of it it turns to be a load itself
Loved the story and the way you mixed reality with some fantasy Great you were able to see the angel Keep writing ^_^ |
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20/08/2010, 12:47 AM
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still waiting for my angle to conquer my world .. thanks for giving me your sweet words |
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20/08/2010, 01:02 AM
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Wish you a nice angel then
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20/08/2010, 01:13 AM
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Wish you whatever you like BTW. I love horses ^_^ |
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21/08/2010, 08:00 AM
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hey there smilinglady
nice work i liked reading thru thank you and please do keep writing
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But there are dreams that cannot be
And there are storms we cannot weather I had a dream my life would be So much different from this hell I'm living So different now from what it seemed Now life has killed The dream I dreamed. |
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22/08/2010, 12:18 AM
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interesting start,,,
i like the construction and the flow of the poem,, very promising start,, welcome the poets' crew
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23/08/2010, 01:52 AM
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thanks for your sweet words ContendeR... |
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