I want to Cray

[مهندس محاكيات]

I want to Cray my writing is always bad and everyone can notice that . I am working hard to improve but I couldn’t beside that my speaking is more than excellent but in academic writing or informal is too bad as they say . How can I improve and beat my problem

[هذي حالي]

hellowz there...
brother..Practice make u perfect!!
so traine ur self
speak english all the time with ur friends and family>>>> and open any english fm radio and listen to english music

[عصآف]

أرسل أصلا بواسطة طالب جامعي 2

I want to Cray my writing is always bad and everyone can notice that . I am working hard to improve but I couldn’t beside that my speaking is more than excellent but in academic writing or informal is too bad as they say . How can I improve and beat my problem

hello there ..

1st of all, as i'm reading ur writing i can see that every thing is ok
the words are in thier correct place !..

or otherwise how did i understood ur writing right now ?!!!

there must be some other problem haaaa ?!

[just friend]

أرسل أصلا بواسطة طالب جامعي 2

I want to Cray my writing is always bad and everyone can notice that . I am working hard to improve but I couldn’t beside that my speaking is more than excellent but in academic writing or informal is too bad as they say . How can I improve and beat my problem

why are you underestaimating your goood writing?

who judge you about your english? are they perfect? are they native english speakers?... as I understood from your talk, "they said" which might be a wrong says"
Come on, you're writing very good.

you know as a suggestion, write a good, meaningful, paragraph, essay whatever you call it. and post it here, let's see if we do unerstand what you're writing... show us, you can do it.. I am quite sure about that.

[مهندس محاكيات]

thanks for all
i will write something here and you can judge me

Dear sir,
Im sending to regard my scholarship which you promised me to give at academic year 2009- 2010. Im looking forward for it but as I herd the company are going to stop all scholarship because economic crisis. Therefore, im asking extremely to allow me join to my college and give me the chance to complete my master degree

[صوت وصورة]

أرسل أصلا بواسطة طالب جامعي 2

thanks for all
i will write something here and you can judge me

Dear sir,
Im sending to regard my scholarship which you promised me to give at academic year 2009- 2010. Im looking forward for it but as I herd the company are going to stop all scholarship because economic crisis. Therefore, im asking extremely to allow me join to my college and give me the chance to complete my master degree

Sorry, but your paragraph here is terrible, sorry again but I am used to be frank for the sake of the "truth"

We all can write Arabic, but the problem is not that. It is to write with the best ever sentence construction and use the right words for the right topic. This applies to English too

I cannot for example say, "you promised me" when writing to registration officer at some university or company

I cannot say, "complete my master degree" as would in Arabic

Asking extremely
and plus many many other comments that I leave it to you and other dear members to talk about

Wish you all the best dear

[just friend]

أرسل أصلا بواسطة طالب جامعي 2

thanks for all
i will write something here and you can judge me

Dear sir,
Im sending to regard my scholarship which you promised me to give at academic year 2009- 2010. Im looking forward for it but as I herd the company are going to stop all scholarship because economic crisis. Therefore, im asking extremely to allow me join to my college and give me the chance to complete my master degree

right. it seems you're poor in writing in a formal way, but this is a letter, anyway. you've got to improve that by looking at formal examples.
I won't be frank so you will not be disappointed. but try it again, never give up.

when you write a formal, it's going to be much closer as question not order or a threatening somebody .. right Frank?
so, keep trying again. don't think you failed or you can't .

[مهندس محاكيات]

أرسل أصلا بواسطة just friend

right. it seems you're poor in writing in a formal way, but this is a letter, anyway. you've got to improve that by looking at formal examples.
I won't be frank so you will not be disappointed. but try it again, never give up.

when you write a formal, it's going to be much closer as question not order or a threatening somebody .. right Frank?
so, keep trying again. don't think you failed or you can't .

ok thanks but how I am asking for gudins me to the right way that why wrote hrer please

[القلب المحب]

I have same prolpme and now I Study english in gollege i try to imbrove my language .
thank you

[bin mohsin]

Brother,
we all dont know how to write but we need to have the brave to make it better.
you should not cry for being not perfect in this language.
crying will never help you, put in mind that you want to do it and you will do it... and good luck insha alah

[مهندس محاكيات]

خلاص كل يوم راح أكتب موضوع من الجريدة النص الأصلي
والنص إلي أنا راح ألخصه أو السمري
واحد منكم يصححه لي وكل يوم على هذا

[bin mohsin]

insha allah
feel free to do so....

[THE BEST KING]

hii bro..
i have faced this problem before..try 2 write more then 2 essays in each day..itz very helpful 4 u >>
after u write the essays go to one of ur teacherz and tell him to correct it and re-write the essays even more then 3 drafts..
i hope this will be useful 4 u..

[al.omaniah]

in my opinion to imprpve your writing ability, you have to read.
so read read and read until you get tired of reading.

all our writings have serious mistakes and others are ready to judgeus, so by reading and know the basic rules of the landuage, you can be a great writer.

["الفقير"]

In addition to what the brothers said,I do recommend you to judge your writing by translating it to arabic and see if it is written in a well manner and does the idea that you want to say it written correctly or not.I think this will help you improving
best wishes

[Mr.Jeep]

أرسل أصلا بواسطة طالب جامعي 2

I want to Cray my writing is always bad and everyone can notice that . I am working hard to improve but I couldn’t beside that my speaking is more than excellent but in academic writing or informal is too bad as they say . How can I improve and beat my problem

Dont say that man at least u r better than us

Keep up the hard work n good luck .......