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30/03/2010, 03:54 PM
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,,,The Ant,,,
The Ant ..
the colony was cheerful in that bright night with a full moon .. the stars were unusually dazzling to the happy ants’ family.. the night was longer than it used to be .. thy were dancing around the chimney .. food is everywhere.. not much thinking of tomorrow and the upcoming hectic work.. the baby ant arrived after a long agonizing story with infertility .. That is why this happiness was expected .. ironically.. they expected something else .. yet that dint stop them from celebrating the birth of the baby ant.. the wondering steps this baby walked around the huge colony was giving him a hint of what is his future is going to look like,,, to be continued,, ( I need somebody to tell me who is the ant character in the story ) …....................
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30/03/2010, 05:22 PM
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Nice..
mafi 5eyarat  ...Your writing is different this time.. waiting for the second part 
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30/03/2010, 06:49 PM
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اقتباس:
 yea,, it's a short story,, concentrate and u might get it,, it's part of our daily life characters thnx for passing by,,
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30/03/2010, 10:02 PM
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thy were dancing around the chimney ..
yet that dint stop them from celebrating the wondering steps this baby walked around the huge colony was giving him a hint of what is his future is going to look like,,, Hello ContendeR, and thank you The words I copied (in red) make me wonder why trying to cut them short! The second part I copied, and when read, get the reader confused. read it again yourself, and decide. I guess it needs some punctuation in order to give it the flow it lacks. Like 'the" and "The" Anyway I guess it is you, or me, or a father or just the mother, having a baby girl when were expecting a boy, or just the other way round. Usually, it is referred to a baby away from gender as "SHE" So, the ANT is simply the little angel, the newly born baby Awaiting the second part, and I hope you do not forget about it as our friend did with his topic |
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31/03/2010, 01:02 AM
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صوت وصورة thnx for ur commnts sir,, and yes it was made short for the purpose of reading it fast just like an sms ,,, the second pat made longer and confusing ,, to confuse people its a long sentence ,, needs concentration,, hmmm,,, good attempt of guessing,,,
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31/03/2010, 08:02 AM
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i confused from this part, i think i won't be here for the second part
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31/03/2010, 09:02 AM
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no no plz be here in the second part   no,, it's not nice,,, it's a surprise,,
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31/03/2010, 02:12 PM
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Listen to what i came up with
...We are the aunt character , we work hard for our living like the working aunt and we hope for the best but sometimes we don't get what we want.. qolo ma shater ba3ad 
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31/03/2010, 03:02 PM
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I cant tell whom you meant by the ant unless i read the whole story.
I hope I wouldnt be the ant anyway |
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31/03/2010, 10:44 PM
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will be here for the second part .
I like to be challenged. |
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31/03/2010, 10:49 PM
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i think the ant is you
 u talk about personal experience
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01/04/2010, 08:24 AM
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اقتباس:
 ant wah3d 
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03/04/2010, 11:15 PM
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hmmm,, BBK ,, you are getting there,, almost,, shater
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03/04/2010, 11:48 PM
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thnx for passing by,, stay close..
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04/04/2010, 01:00 AM
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I was getting worried  ...Thanks When is the next part? I know the answer but i rather give a chance to others >>>>shala5
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04/04/2010, 03:01 PM
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great,, so, did u figure out who is the ant character ??
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04/04/2010, 03:02 PM
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اقتباس:
no, sorry it's not me,, but..
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04/04/2010, 03:03 PM
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اقتباس:
two days more ,, next part is coming soon,,
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06/04/2010, 09:49 PM
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اقتباس:
but it is you
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07/04/2010, 12:10 AM
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اقتباس:
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: : May the road rise to meet you And the wind be at your back May the sun shine warm upon your face And the rain fall gently on your fields And until we meet again, may God hold you in the hollow of His hand سيرحل قلمي الجريح..
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07/04/2010, 12:17 AM
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